love, Sunday morning easy

My answer to "he's too nice", that's why i could never love him.

who suspects amorous notions

screeching beneath flames fervent in opposing directions

is affection extreme kindness

 

stroking tresses unceasingly til arriving at the

small of back petting essence

soulful attention vital parts above nostrils

heart so full having to turn away from as

to avoid unblinking prowess

what is a love that stomps roots

sending weary foundation tumbling to its detriment

 

when is it senseless

evocative honesty leaving paramours

mingled with labored air at tenderness

bound by strength…it’s courage alchemy

continuously spending itself upon intended

switching orb…drained by gratuity

 

lost abilities is to actuate

lord...have mercy

I don’t mind

Reviews

[Lyn Anderson]

A brilliant, perceptive, and well conceived piece.

[Sami Khalil]

We are drawn to certain people for some reasons more than others. Some to the bad ones, others to the nice and noblee ones. But in my opinion we are what we reflect on others and what we need from others that will satisfy us or our craves. lasting ones have to have stronger foundations and communications...Exceelnt ...:)......................

[Shirlena]

I think you are correct Sam...we get what we are. There is something about us that draws a particular type and sometimes we allow ourselves to stay in a pattern. I heard somebody say if we keep having bad relationship after the other then we need to stop looking at them (Oh woe is me) and start looking at us. Thank you for reading and being so intuitive.

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. So true. You are welcome...:)........................

[Frieda P]

Ha you don't mind but I bet you've lusted many a bad boy, go on admit it Shirlena. ;-)

stroking tresses unceasingly til arriving at the
small of back petting essence

Does sound oh so nice...I love the way you smack me upside the head with your poetry, feels so good......

[Shirlena]

I had crushes on bad boys but that was when I was 12 and 13...I found out that a few supposed nerds I dated were actually bad boys, how about that for a twist. I have had only two bad boys for boyfriends and guess what...they never got the cookie LOL. I told you before Frieda...I've always been in control in the relationship and what I mean is they thought they were slick until they met me...and even the two times I got the pink slip from a guy...they still felt like they were the one's terminated. I am my mother's daughter but I didn't toy with anyone's emotion either, just always known how to handle myself with men.

[Shirlena]

Oh and thanks again for enjoying my poetry...I get so carried away in our talks I forget everything else.

[Jack...]

Perhaps my friend this will help keep nice guys from always finishing last. Being kind and courteous does seem to have it's drawbacks at times. But in my mind it boils down to showing respect for someone.

Loved your peom today my friend, your work always seems to send my mind into a deep thinking zone.

[Shirlena]

I'm really honored that my poetry can possibly lift your spirits...good poetry has the same effect on me and in my group of favorites...you and Frieda or two of my favorites of the favorite and give me a thrill a minute as I get to indulge in your artistry.