60 seconds and surely ego tripping

to my vexing there has been

60 seconds of melancholy

contemplating I should regret

what has occurred an apparition...you

had to remind myself to remember

discovering it’s not so much a habit

as I had ruminated the situation

not suggesting you’re replaceable

as you go on fulfilling a need

required to console these trolls of doubt

figuring your gratitude over facts

I didn't surrender you to shade  

long before now

no possibilities for luminosity

among all of this sumptuous jasper sprawling… grandeur

with dangling certitude

plenty time to deliberate ‘bout self

calculating your blessing before you rest

or maybe I got the summation

cell intercepted one call… I rolled and did not answer

 

maybe…I assumed wrong

Reviews

[m.s.early]

You paint intriguing characters and include enough to get the biting point well. Great form and unique style. Kudos! :)

[Shirlena]

Thank you x.

[Jack...]

Shirlene, you never cease to impress me with your thoughts and ideas. This again finds someone on the other end...not too sure of their place or the poet not too sure. You make me think when I read and I like that.

[Shirlena]

PAY RENT
Well here goes, she hasn't talked to him or seen him lately. He is MIA and she thought she would miss him more than she has and it hasn't been that bad without him. She keeps going on in her head about how he should be grateful to have been with her and she should've of gotten rid of him long ago but then she thinks she hasn't gotten but one phone call from him and then she get's nervous because she figures maybe he doesn't really miss her either-lol. She figures all of this out in a minute and now her ego is deflated. Isn't that just like humans? Thanks for wondering, reading and being entertained Jack-smile.

[Shirlena]

Sorry about that PAY RENT...ignore it, mistake LOL.

[A. Amos]

This is interesing and mesmerzing piece, simply beautiful

[Shirlena]

You're such a sweetie face A. You are making me blush. Thank you :)

[A. Amos]

You're welcome my dear