jesse with the night

I couldn't sleep last night so...

 

found out Jesse wasn’t squeamish of sapphire girls

felt like dreaming…those where he’s in the house

but you can’t exchange pheromones with him…doesn’t realize

you’re waiting for application in adjacent rooms

awakened by chasm of empty ambiance…before the next few hours

 

forced from a  resentful bed…it was the batting lamp

with a monitor for a head transmitting him into the middle

of thermostat hums and semi-precious dusk

professional women raising their dresses impressing with thigh

to straddle Jesse…Jesse looking right as polished cherry wood

 

women 20 years his junior wanting a piece of experience

cause Jesse should…Jesse suggested love to Indigo

hinting they might become limbs twisted in navy opaque ovoid

commence laying intricate carpet when times are ripe

incited jealousy wanting him to see my face amidst the half darkness

 

I was the one who couldn’t recover from delirium…

his series of detection and correcting illegal sins

chosen to keep me in a state of arabesque

eyes fixed… a pillow to elevate the concentrated reactions

study every inclination…comforting decadent pleasure in my element

 

we will meet another restless bout…

next paradise marathon… ruggedly enticing Mr. Jesse Stone

as I must mostly always…always

have you on

 

Reviews

[Frieda P]

So many grand lines I don't know where to start. You had me at 'awakened by chasm of empty ambiance' but that was just the beginning, just suffice to say I could very well copy and paste this entire write. Who could resist Tom Selleck or Jesse Stone, I'd die to become a sapphire girl, just saying.

Excellent as always Shirlena.

[Shirlena]

I'm curious, what is your interpretation of a "sapphire girl" or what do you think it means :) because I'm willing to bet if you knew what I was talking about you probably wouldn't Frieda but I would love to hear your thoughts on it and thank you so much for enjoying my poem. I'm honored by your commentary.

[Frieda P]

Hmmm, did I step in that one or what? ha...I happen to love sapphires, I was thinking of someone troubled, or 'blue', but sparkly ;-) Apparently I'm way off base........give it to me gently.

[Shirlena]

Oh no it's okay if your interpretation doesn't match what I meant. I enjoyed your interpretation of it anyway and I used these metaphors to explain that Jesse just likes women...period-smile.

[Frieda P]

Gawd he sounds just like a man ;-)

[Shirlena]

Yeah and acts just like one too lol.

[Adam Whitworth]

font is a bit small for reading here

[Shirlena]

Okay, I'll enlarge them. Thank you Adam

[Eric Pudalov]

Wow, look what beautiful art comes out of a sleepless night! Although I've only read several of your poems thus far, I must say that I really enjoy the flow of words, like "Jesse suggested love to Indigo/hinting they might become limbs twisted in navy opaque ovoid." It evokes so many powerful images, and feels almost dreamlike.

That's part of the reason that you inspired me to write a poem right after reading one of yours, so thank you so much! I plan on writing some more (without copying your style, of course). Oh, and I forgot to mention - one of my favorite lines is "commence laying intricate carpet when times are ripe." It feels so sexually raw, and yet satirical in a sense. Keep it up, as I like to say!

[Shirlena]

Thank you so much Eric. I look forward to reading your poems soon :).

[Ai Lun]

You are truly a master of rhyme and rhythm!

[Shirlena]

Thanks Aaron but anyone can be...I think you are great too but it is work isn't it and everyone has their own signature beat :)

[Ai Lun]

Thank you :) and yes everyone has their own way of doing it. (But I really specifically like your way :P haha)

[Shirlena]

Your sweet Aaron and I yours.

[Sami Khalil]

I can't figure out your awesome style. Elegant but earthly at the same time. Deep but any one can swim in it and enjoy it...I like this write as usual with others...:).........

[Shirlena]

I'm sorry I've been trying to get around to answering everyone and it's been a task...fun but a task. Thank you Sam, always welcome your reviews.

[Sami Khalil]

My pleasure...:)..................