pitiful seeds: licking wounds with blame on our hands

Inspired by Sami Khalil's "Wounded Generations" Thank you for the motivation Sam.

would it be the transgression

of a sovereign POET

the great PROVIDER of night and day

who conjured up sea brought forth the wild beast

with sun moon and his sister stars

unprecedented symmetry fashion and make

when human images created to remain

in the first garden Eden chose to forsake

assigning animals on land sailing the skies

first man first woman perfect sexes

was it not they and their declining progression

(stop paradise ya'll...for they've opted for gratuitous decay)

 

that we live only to die

we ungrateful... offspring write the demons

against the infinite author of scripture and passage

sewn from communities to nations to masses

erected technology to detriment and gain

while greed overcomes us at expense

of destitute souls

giving no concern to the tired and weak

for exorbitance of mint paper that barters like gold

march to their death coming of age youth to expire as men

in wars we have no reasonable explanations for

earth and nature's betrayal is poetic justice

rains on us acid as we corrupt surplus

food and sustenance we incinerate while

the hole in hunger and ozone is neglected gaping

aimed armed and ready to destroy fellow man

with rampant hate

licking our wounds never accepting

as culprits

unworthy prodigy we are to negate blame

Reviews

[Michael (Letters and Li..]

Wow. I love how you didn't hold back. True writing - Uncensored truth. Thank you for sharing!

[Shirlena]

Thank you Micheal, I appreciate the read and for now providing me with someone new I can read as well.

[Vani Jalagar]

very true and impressive... thank you for sharing this wonderful poetry Shirlena.

[Shirlena]

Thank you, looking forward to being impressed by you too Vani

[paras]

such a true write.!! great work keep it up..!!:)

[Shirlena]

Thank you so much Paras for reading.

[Ars Goetia Poetry]

This is really gd, I am impressed :)

[Shirlena]

Thank you. I'm impressed that you came by to read it ;)

[Blue]

Uncensored truth. I love the way you didn't hold it back. Very well-written!

[Shirlena]

Sorry for my "drive by" responses just haven't had a chance to elaborate lately. Thank you Arzel.

[Blue]

Naah, mine, too. I wish I could review everyone's work as detailed and as constructive as I can but there's just no enough time. Anyway, elaborate or not, I appreciate your reviews, Shirlena. you really know what you are doing.

[Penny]

Like Sami's poems were not technical enough:-D. Frankly, being a rookie I have no right to review this piece. Still, good luck. Salute!

[Shirlena]

Ok thanks for reading anyway Penny.

[Penny]

My pleasure. :-)

[AYVID N]

Very thoughtful and moving. And written with lot of emotion. This is what I call inspired writing. Thank you Sami Khalil, for sharing it with me.

[Shirlena]

Thanks Divya for reading and thanks Sami for the referral.

[Sarah]

this is really good! evertime i thought is was getting lost it came to me, this is a well written simple yet complex! this is good!

[Shirlena]

Thank you tweety, I'm thrilled you were able to find your way through it.

[Raymond Federle]

Complex and compelling. Simply wonderful! :)

[Shirlena]

Thank you so much Raymond and I look forward to reading your writing too.

[Chandradhish Ghosh]

This was suggested to me by Sami...and I really thank him for suggesting this. A part of me as also misanthropist, we betray nature to satisfy our endless needs...

[Shirlena]

Sami is cool people and I thank him so much and u for coming by and giving me such pleasantry Chandradhish.