STRANGLED LoVe

'I' here, stands for ego, that kills love. We lose most of our beautiful relationships, just because we are so tightly trapped in our egos.

Tall, huge, endless,
wide is the sky
Unless to measure,
with your fingers you try!
Through which, it's just a tiny blue patch.
Deprived of dignity, tightly tied.
You will see it only as much,
as your ego will decide!

Love knew no boundaries
but we chose to measure
Our unworthy evaluations
made us lose that treasure

Denounced, deceived
always at stake
Heart is a thing
Devised to break!
Again and again,
to talk to you.
Have been walking miles
to walk to you

When arguments end
tell me someday
Did you pretend?
Did I betray?
Or was it just time
to drift away?
Or was it just me
to feel that way?

In your memories, soaring high,
there is this sky, and there is an 'I',
trying to wipe which, each night I cry,
If nothing else, at least a nicer goodbye?

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[Saddam]

In your memories, soaring high,
there is this sky, and there is an 'I',
trying to wipe which, each night I cry,
If nothing else, at least a nicer goodbye?

An awesome write with true emotions. I like it much.... well created.