Fruitful Love

My love is but a seed 

which will always grow to feed

you are the lush within my rain

the one ill clearly gain

i thank the vibrant moon

for the union that comes soon

so be the gem within my life

and the laughter of my wife

Reviews

[Suditi]

I agree with Melissa..It does like a perfect proposal.
Really beautiful.

[Emily Rae]

sounds like a perfect proposal to me

[WordNerd]

Excellent poem, your imagery is remarkable :D

[Layla J Omorose]

great poem. I enjoyed the rhyming and flow of the poem....very good.

[alexlessah]

nice!

[piggy]

so lovely is this writing.

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

beautiful!