My Distant Treasure

You're a painted gentle dove

on the canvas up above

despite the distant far

you'll always be a star 

you surely won my gaze 

regardless of the haze

so be the life within my pond 

and my never ending bond

Reviews

[Ezekiel Silver]

This is a very good poem!! Keep up the good work!!!

[WordNerd]

Keep writing!! Keep it up! Your a talented writer!

[Queen of Hearts]

Your should be "You're"
u'll should be "you'll"
surly should be "surely"
I'm sorry for correcting, but I'm used to proof-reading for people!!!

I love poems that rhyme, so this one was pretty enjoyable. Keep it up! :)

[cfix]

This is really amazing I enjoyed this.
Wonderful rhyme scheme and flow!