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It's Called 'Clearing Up'

It's Called 'Clearing Up'

A Poem by John Galloway
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Oh yeah. Just a poem. Weird poem. Good though.

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How confusing life is,
I'm crawling through,
Being distracted by all these lights and sounds,

I'm crawling through,
Being bribed by my own mind,
Yeah, it can bribe me,

Well, it does a good job,
I fall in the bribe,
But my mind lied,
It offered happiness,
In return for instant gratification,
Which, in transaction, is a thing called "being naive"

Well, those lights and sounds cleared up one day,
And my mind finally shut the f**k up,
And there was a hand reaching,
As if it were going to help.

And, help it did,
And, finally, I learned to take a bribe from the right artery:
My heart.

Oh yeah, oh yes.
A chance at love?
Sounds absolutely delicious.

© 2008 John Galloway


Author's Note

John Galloway
I felt a bit of sarcasm from this, amid the happiness. So it goes.

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hey
i really love this:

Well, it does a good job,
I fall in the bribe,
But my mind lied,
It offered happiness,
In return for instant gratification,
Which, in transaction, is a thing called "being naive"

i love the sarcasm. i really just understand this piece. good job :]


Posted 15 Years Ago



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John Galloway
John Galloway

Spring Hill, FL



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I'm John. I'm also known as Jean and Pikachu. You can use on of those or come up with some other nickname for me; I don't really mind. I'm 16. I'm taken by the greatest girl in the world. more..

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