Little Barefoot Laughing Girl

Little Barefoot Laughing Girl

A Poem by Shimmerbliss/CAF
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I can still see her like this...

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Little barefoot laughing girl

Dancing limbs content to twirl

Turns and runs with flapping arms

Captures me with childish charms


Wiggling toes beneath her gown

Comic grin - a precious clown

Pigtails, polka dots and bows

Standing up on tippy-toes


Magic permeates our days

Garden weeds become bouquets

Tiny birds, a nest above

Fuzzy kittens, baby love


Open arms held up to me

Innocent sincerity

Little fingers gently trace

Paths of love around my face      

© 2012 Shimmerbliss/CAF


Author's Note

Shimmerbliss/CAF
I am so glad I took notes way back when. A poem, like many things, is better late than never.

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Hate to use the word, but this is "sweet"--and touching and heartwarming and endearing.
OK, I suppose, I'd have to include precious and loving.
Now, bliss, I gotta go take some insulin.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Shimmerbliss/CAF

12 Years Ago

Might I say that was a "sweet" review? LOL It was though and I liked it. Thanks, Frank. It is a pr.. read more
It's adorable. Great job

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Shimmerbliss/CAF

12 Years Ago

Thank you...she's all grown up now.
last line: gold

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Shmoke-Sifted Heftlander

12 Years Ago

:) everything else had been said and seemed like a given, in regard to reviewing, but that one stood.. read more
Shimmerbliss/CAF

12 Years Ago

Thanks.
Shmoke-Sifted Heftlander

12 Years Ago

you're welcome..it's nice when you can just live in the moment with some prose..you're welcome
This is just magical--beautiful write! especially the last stanza!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I loved spending time with my kids when they were little, the world is full of magic for them at that age. You captured that well here, and brought back a lot of fond memories of my own children. :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I live in the moment. A beautiful write!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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. lovely ... loving ... and lovable poetry ...

. love it ...

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Beautifully capturing the innocence and delight.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on June 6, 2012
Last Updated on July 10, 2012
Tags: children, parental love, innocence, memory

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