RESPECT

RESPECT

A Poem by Shimmerbliss/CAF
"

Respect Personified

"

Respect

rests quietly,

but if he rises

he has a mountain's voice  

without words.


He is stalwart as a soldier,

frightening as a general 

YET

gentle as a kitten's curl

when pressed 

against

a trustworthy heart.


He is not demeaned

by bowing

to the most 

unlikely masters

and

stands with Lady Justice

when sparrows are broken.


His leathered hands

cradle withered seeds

and he plants them surely

for he knows the bloom

of hope.

© 2012 Shimmerbliss/CAF


Author's Note

Shimmerbliss/CAF
Written for the "Respect Personified" Contest...please let me know what you think.

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What I think?

Well, Claire,
I'm not certain I've enough or adequate words to express how impressed and swept-up I am by the sheer power and wisdom emanating from your words, into my mind, heart, and soul. Suffice it to say how very much I wish I'd composed this wonderful Free Verse piece — even more-so, how envious I am by the level of your grammatical and creative skills. Respect? Yes, you can certainly call it that (and so much more).

What a distinct pleasure you are to read … thank you so very much, Dear Claire! ⁓ Richard

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Shimmerbliss/CAF

8 Years Ago

Thank you for this beautiful review, Richard. This is one of my favorites...it reminds me of my fath.. read more
Richard🖌

8 Years Ago

You are sincerely and warmly welcome, Claire … smiles 'n hugs!
I know your father loved you.. read more



Reviews

What I think?

Well, Claire,
I'm not certain I've enough or adequate words to express how impressed and swept-up I am by the sheer power and wisdom emanating from your words, into my mind, heart, and soul. Suffice it to say how very much I wish I'd composed this wonderful Free Verse piece — even more-so, how envious I am by the level of your grammatical and creative skills. Respect? Yes, you can certainly call it that (and so much more).

What a distinct pleasure you are to read … thank you so very much, Dear Claire! ⁓ Richard

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Shimmerbliss/CAF

8 Years Ago

Thank you for this beautiful review, Richard. This is one of my favorites...it reminds me of my fath.. read more
Richard🖌

8 Years Ago

You are sincerely and warmly welcome, Claire … smiles 'n hugs!
I know your father loved you.. read more
I am impressed by your vision of respect. To me respect personified would be the character of Atticus Finch in To Kill A Mockingbird. I don't know why and of course he is not a real person but in terms of respect he ticked all the boxes. Your character seems to have similar strengths :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Shimmerbliss/CAF

12 Years Ago

What an awesome thought. Thank you so much! :)
I love the way you see respect, a powerful writing! also, the idea is great! Everyone deserves respect~ Also, I love the structure of the poem as well!
Nice written!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Shimmerbliss/CAF

12 Years Ago

Thank you so much! It is special to me, and I appreciate you taking time to read it and leave me su.. read more
Cynthia Man

12 Years Ago

Ur welcome :D:D
Stunning.....I am stunned, brilliant waves of soothing emotions that touch the balance of protection, healthy fear of conservation and love when respect is involved.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Shimmerbliss/CAF

12 Years Ago

I am humbled by your words and you have my most sincere thanks.
love the ideals

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Shimmerbliss/CAF

12 Years Ago

I do too.
Another poet killing me, love your witing

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Shimmerbliss/CAF

12 Years Ago

Can't wait to read your work. Start uploading! Not to sound bossy or anything. :/
"but if he rises
He has a mountain's voice
Without words"
This is such a beautiful visual. The words flow effortlessly together. I love this.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Shimmerbliss/CAF

12 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind thoughts on this!
wow... deep and powerful...and perfectly gauged, well done!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Shimmerbliss/CAF

12 Years Ago

I appreciate your thoughts on it. Means a lot. :)
This is such a profound yet gentle expression of respect. This is how it should unfold in life...All encompassing..strong , soft and bold all in the manner in which it is needed. A beautiful write and even more beautiful thought.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Shimmerbliss/CAF

12 Years Ago

Thank you. This one is near to my heart.

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Added on May 27, 2012
Last Updated on May 28, 2012
Tags: RESPECT, ESTEEM, REGARD, DEFER

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