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Compartment 114
Compartment 114
Like and Love

Like and Love

A Poem by xXotaku-girlXx
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super random piece of writing that isn't even really a poem, but some feelings...

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 I think we're friends,

maybe not?

I like you more

Then i ought.

You make me smile

You make me cry

I guess you're just that

kind of guy.

I think about you

all the time

You're the only one

who's on my mind.

You make me laugh,

feel like a child,

i want to see you

all the while.

All the while

you're with her

I like you both

so it doesn't hurt.

I think I like you,

maybe not

I love you more

then i ought.

Do I love you?

As a friend?

I don't know

and never will.

 

© 2009 xXotaku-girlXx


Author's Note

xXotaku-girlXx
ignore the fact that i am not a poem writer ><

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>_ > when did u write this?! whos it about??? lillie you good!!!!!! you should help ne write MY poems, cause i suck! i love love loved it!!!! i like it, its slightly depressing but at the same time makes me happy, and for some reason makes me think of jon???

Posted 15 Years Ago


A sweet, nice poem. I like how playful it is. I can imagine this being the thoughts a girl sitting down and trying to figure out her feelings. It's a fun, enjoyable read. I think you're a good poet; keep at it and you'll discover your talent.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow! Cool poem! I really liked it! Even though you're not much of a poet(that's what you say), I think you did a great job with this poem! It expressed a lot of feelings, and made me think about the difference between like and love. Awesome poem! :D

Posted 15 Years Ago



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Added on August 3, 2009
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Wish I was in Kyoto..., OR



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BONJOUR!!!!!!! Hey, I'm Lillie... age:13 height: 5ft (I'm kinda short)... location: Oregon, but I wish I was in Kyoto right now!!!!!! grades: A's all around IF YOU MESS WITH MY FRIENDS, I'LL B.. more..

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