If there are any rules in poetry they've been trampled so much now you need a bucket and mop, to find them under all the mud the Dadaists brought in on their shoes! This is a really good piece, I like it. When read aloud it sounds very bluesy. The use of colour, bold and slanted text is a novel touch that shows a lot of understanding--modern poetry is found in text, not as often read in communion, it only makes sense to explore how we can use the text, and the page, to generate new meaning. Keep exploring!
The poem is very good. I like how you expressed sleep. Nice flow of thoughts led to a good ending. Myth and tale. Just dreams for the hopeless? A interesting poem. Made the reader think. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote
If there are any rules in poetry they've been trampled so much now you need a bucket and mop, to find them under all the mud the Dadaists brought in on their shoes! This is a really good piece, I like it. When read aloud it sounds very bluesy. The use of colour, bold and slanted text is a novel touch that shows a lot of understanding--modern poetry is found in text, not as often read in communion, it only makes sense to explore how we can use the text, and the page, to generate new meaning. Keep exploring!