Myths For The Weak

Myths For The Weak

A Poem by Shidonii
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A little something from the heart and soul.

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Because when the soul runs low and the drinks aren't cheap, all you need is a little sleep
Sleep for the sadness, sleep for the sick, sleep for the ones you forever miss. 
‘Cause when your love dives low and your heart skips a beat, don’t listen to it, Honey. 
It’s only myths for the weak...

© 2015 Shidonii


Author's Note

Shidonii
Pretty much just wrote this out, doesn't really have anything following the "rules" of poetry... if it even is poetry.

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If there are any rules in poetry they've been trampled so much now you need a bucket and mop, to find them under all the mud the Dadaists brought in on their shoes! This is a really good piece, I like it. When read aloud it sounds very bluesy. The use of colour, bold and slanted text is a novel touch that shows a lot of understanding--modern poetry is found in text, not as often read in communion, it only makes sense to explore how we can use the text, and the page, to generate new meaning. Keep exploring!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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The poem is very good. I like how you expressed sleep. Nice flow of thoughts led to a good ending. Myth and tale. Just dreams for the hopeless? A interesting poem. Made the reader think. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

If there are any rules in poetry they've been trampled so much now you need a bucket and mop, to find them under all the mud the Dadaists brought in on their shoes! This is a really good piece, I like it. When read aloud it sounds very bluesy. The use of colour, bold and slanted text is a novel touch that shows a lot of understanding--modern poetry is found in text, not as often read in communion, it only makes sense to explore how we can use the text, and the page, to generate new meaning. Keep exploring!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on April 24, 2015
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Tags: depression, poetry, Shidonii, heart break, heart broken, sadness, sick, sleep, weak, myths

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Shidonii
Shidonii

Gainesville, FL



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I'm 17, I only occasionally write and it's usually only when I'm extremely depressed so... enjoy. more..