Chapter 1 Beginnings

parenthesis means that the characters are talking in their minds. i may add more

 Good and bad samurai shinobi's are on the verge of colliding with each other. Clash to clash, blade to blade, hidden techniques to hidden techniques, all of worlds peace has fallen apart because of the evil samurai shinobi's but who are waiting for them is Shizuko Yukimura and all good samurai shinobi's. "Blood against blood, hatred against hatred, innocent people dying, the worlds falling apart, it's just too much of a burden to watch." Shizuko said to Shinju her younger sister. "Yes sis it is indeed a burden to watch, it aches my heart just seeing that." Shinju stated to her older sister. In the distance Shizuko saw Izanagi and his gang coming for an assault. "Sis keep a sharp eye we've got some uninvited guess." Shizuko  warned her sister. Izanagi and his gang scattered around the vast land. Shizuko used her hidden technique to create a massive wind. "Can't hide from me, hmph!! this'll be a drag I just know it." Shizuko said to Izanagi and his crew.

"I'm surprised you've noticed us but this is as far as you go." Izanagi said to Shizuko. "Two against five. Do we have the advantage? Will we sustain their abilities to buy time? How long can we hold for? Will we make it alive? This is a battle we can't lose. (If I  separate Izanagi and his crew we might have the advantage, It's risky but I must do it.)" Shizuko created a sign, the sign of separation to separate her and her sister. Shizuko separated her sister with Junichi and Katsuro to Mitsuru an island among the south. Shizuko separated her along with Seiichi,  Takayuki and Izanagi. "(I hope that my sister will be alright.)" "Where are we? Where's Junichi and Katsuro? TCH!!! you, we'll finish you off in a heartbeat." Seiichi said with a cocky  attitude.

"(Is this guy for real? He's so stubborn, but I must not let my guard down. If I let my guard down for a minute I'll become  vulnerable. Hm! guess I have to be per-cautious.)" Shizuko said with confidence. Shizuko readied Kokuro to battle these three. Clinging and clanging, kicking and punching. Yelling, lightning sparks in the area. Blood dripping everywhere, "To cut this long battle short, I'll finish this, drown in despair, this is the power of Shizuko Yukimura, divine power." Shizuko said with such confidence. Shizuko created a mist that is so dense that nobody can see in the area. "Transform Kokuro." Shizuko said quietly. Kokuro transformed into a double sided kunai with a lethal  poison. Shizuko sliced Izanagi's side and the others. "Consume my  poison and perish it's a suitable ending for you." Shizuko said honestly.

"(Is my sister alright. I must see.)" Shizuko said with concern. Shizuko used a sign to teleport to the island. "Ahh are you alright sis?" Shizuko said in despair. "Yeah sis I dealt with 'em." Shinju responded to her sister. "Good I've finished 'em of as well." Shizuko said with such confidence.

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