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He dosn't like the pain,
But he needs to feel something,
Because he's numb,
He wants to have emotions,
But he lacks them,
They were stolen by the others,
The ones who wish to cause pain,
Because they have nothing better to do,
He desires an end to the torture,
And wonders if they will notice he's gone,
So he ends it,
Now they are the sad ones,
They are the ones with no emotion,
And they must carry around that guilt,
For the rest of their lives,
With no way to go back,
No way to stop themselves,
But they should have thought of that then,
Because now it is too late,
For all of them.

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[Sky]

I have but one sugession, that you add a stanza break and period after "So he ends it". (I would remove that line altogether with the stanza break but thats just me, and I'm strange. :) )