Exceptional

Exceptional

A Poem by Sherwette

Exceptional
Except that it is unacceptable
Because average is in demand
For those born to consume
And not willing to presume
Creating a brand new brand
Exceptional
Becomes defeated
In the eyes of who don’t believe
In investing on achievers
Exceptional
Will be depleted if it keeps on being mistreated

© 2011 Sherwette


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Loved the first four lines. So true! I usually hate the word ...unacceptable...its overused these days in our modern assertive communication...but it fits well here. I like the way you observe that 'average' is in demand...people are so afraid of being different sometimes. Thanks.

Posted 13 Years Ago


mistreating exceptional will bring an end to its flame. Well penned.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on September 6, 2011
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Sherwette
Sherwette

Cairo, Egypt



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I am a writer writing my own first novel now and always looking for constructive criticism. I will write anything you name it articles, short stories, songs and whatever I feel like expressing to insp.. more..

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