Fuzzy Hope

Fuzzy Hope

A Story by Sherwette
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"Mini Saga: A short story told in exactly 50 words. Not 49. Not 51."

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“I didn’t want to leave because I hoped it will eventually get better,” Mariah sighed thankfully.

“But then why did you leave?” curiously asked Adam.

“You can’t hold on to something you don’t have otherwise you’ll lose everything you’re about to have,” Mariah answered with a smile on her face.

© 2011 Sherwette


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PS in my library!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wonderful. Thanks, just what I needed to read this morning!

Posted 13 Years Ago


It gives a good message, I really like it. It is philosophical. In some cultures it is advised not to hold anything in this temporal world, because all that we see do not belong to us. A good piece indeed

Posted 13 Years Ago


the saddest song of old. Do you ever find you are holding on to nothing with everything you have and not seeing what is right there in front of your face. I like this.........

Posted 13 Years Ago


Thanks thats good...although I would have phrased it ...asked Adam curiously rather than curiously asked Adam.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Sherwette
Sherwette

Cairo, Egypt



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I am a writer writing my own first novel now and always looking for constructive criticism. I will write anything you name it articles, short stories, songs and whatever I feel like expressing to insp.. more..

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