Letting Go

"Mini Saga: A short story told in exactly 50 words. Not 49. Not 51."

I tipped one foot in this ocean and another in a whole new world. I decided I will let loose and go for the whole new world. My neck slightly tilted to the back and a mild voice whispered “If you still want to try don’t let go just yet.”

Reviews

[April Child]

Love the short story. It's really an art to say everything in so few words but makes it all the more powerful. Undiluted.

[patricia]

I liked...a mild voice whispered.

Loved the ending. There is always hope. Thankyou.

[Calypso]

I love the idea of only 50 words. I'll be the first to admit that its harder to write a short story then a poem or book.
Now with that said...
I loved this. It left a trail of wonder.

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

I like this...........one foot on the shore and one foot in the water, a perfect balance...

[kdpgrahi]

Yes there always is a new world, leaving the past one should look for the new world. I love this writing. Please carry on.