Mirror, Mirror

I wrote the first part last year, but just recently did the second part. I was inspired by a book based on Snow White, but I can't remember what it was called. Please enjoy!

Fear the Hunter Mirror, mirror
Fear the blade         On the wall
Fear revenge Who is fairest
That must be paid.       Of us all?

Fear the Queen              You are fair 
And fear the Hag        But one is more
You're such a beauty          'Till Snow White's heart
Dressed in rags.     Shall beat no more

Fear the watchers         Come now Huntsman

In the woods   You're quite smart
Fear the fruit               Kill the girl
She says is good.       Bring me her heart

Run sweet girl    Mirror mirror

Who's fair as snow         On the wall
Hair like ravens     Now who's fairest
Lips like rose. Of us all?

Fear the stranger         Your beauty is great

Coming by    And shines quite bright

Selling treats      But a pig's heart

So good you'll die          Is not Snow White's

Fear the apple       What is it now!

Such a treat      My Hunter said

It's poisoned taste  That dear Snow White

Is bittersweet Was Surely dead!

Find the cottage        I'll kill her then
Hidden deep          With just one bite
You'll fall into       She'll surely die
Eternal sleep.       Without a fight

Fear the Hunter       And poor Snow White
Fear it all    Will sleep forever
For you're the fairest       'Till true loves kiss
One of all.         With fail to get her...

Author's Note

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