Can you see me now?

Emotions erupted.

I can see the trees

How they scream....

Tortures me.

 

I can feel the wind

How it howls....

Pains me.

 

Mans torture of nature is unjust and cruel,

A society of lies, intent on destruction,

A society of choking smoke and grim annihalation.

 

A culling of reality has ensued,

To embrace a technological essence of agony,

Why must we make her cry?

 

Mother nature was the first,

The higher powers are making sure,

That the executioners end it all.

Reviews

[Skoo.]

I really like this. The wording's really strong, which emphasises the emotion of it brilliantly. Glad to see you're still writing (:

[FaithfullyJennyBear]

Awesome dude, very emotional and I don't understand most of the words xD you know Mr, im slightly stoopid xD loveyoulotsies xxx

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

A delightful and freeing piece, perfect flow also.

[MoriartyMesa]

I enjoyed this, felt the content was a little forced but I did enjoy this.

[Lily Mae]

This has so much truth... We need to quit the abuse on Mother Nature before she gives up on all of us...xo Great write..x

[Coyote Poetry]

A powerful and sad poem for Nature. It is sad how we abuse the water, air and the earth. Man hunger is not common sense. We need Mother Nature more then she needs us. I like the direct and honest words in this poem. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote