Inside my head lies the pain that you delivered

I'm about to walk away

Away from this world

 

Away from pain

Away from misery

 

But I can't do it alone,

Who could?

Who could leave a world so full of hate

Yet so full of love

 

So instead i'm going to lie here

And watch the sun shine

 

I'm going to watch the fire engines and the police cars pass

I'm going to watch the crimes be commited

I'm going to watch the victims scream

And y'know what?

 

It'll remind me that I live alone in a world of pain and joy

Alone inside my mind

Reviews

[Ruth]

A tender balance is life...and all it bestows...sometimes the hate has to shine for the love to grow - darkness and light...consciousness is stirring though and more and more people feel like this of late! I only hope we can have strength to see balance pan out and connect more!
Thought provoking piece hon xoxo

[Coyote Poetry]

A poem with a lot of sadness. Hard to get up when everything we do is wrong. I like the way you wrote this poem.
"I'm going to watch the fire engines and the police cars pass
I'm going to watch the crimes be commited
I'm going to watch the victims scream
And y'know what?"
Thank you for a excellent poem.
Coyote

[Kate Hunter]

As I was reading this I realized how much I could relate to this peice. You've done an amazing job with the imagery and the word choice, it flowed perfectly. Keep up the good work.

[DearSweetAgony]

Very dark and twisted, but I think thats the reason why I love it.
I really like the end I think thats what got me the most.

[Calypso]

grisly and creepy, nice

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

A highly dark and twisted painful piece that screams excellence, well done

[ivizarx]

pretty dark, deep, emotional, and seems suicidal-questioning. you did a great job writing this however, and relating suicidal-questioning with the cruelty and bleakness of the world. also am pretty intrigued by the structure, it's very fitting for this sort of writing. good job mate.

[Jessica Marlow]

umm u might when live another day or a lot longer than that anybody needs to

[guiltyascharged]

That's creepy but very well written. Good write and
you did so good on the details. You should be proud of
this write, I know I would be. You did great.