I wonder...

Well I personally don't understand why i'm writing this

I guess it's a vent, if anything

I spend my days pondering

Wondering whether or not this existence of mine is a good idea

Or whether I am.... just constantly asleep

That really is a strange thought

Never truly being awake

Always dreaming

I wonder if anyone will read this and review it

And not just a review saying "cool" or wow I love it!"

I think I need a psycho-analysis more than anything

Well thats what the cat told me anyway

I'm sat here

On a Sunday evening

With Black Metal blasting

And writing this profound gobbldy goop

Urgh I think i'll leave it here

I'm thinking of doing this everyday...

Would you read it, if I did?

Reviews

[DearSweetAgony]

I feel like this too.
Like somedays I feel as if everything is a long detailed dream, like one day I will wake up to find my self in a hospital room. And then these people who I've never seen before will tell me that I was in a car crash and I've been in a coma for 13 years. And I would look different and sound different yet think the same.

Anyway thank you for posting this write, it made me think.

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

The fantasy of reading to heal is most pounding here, well done, good read.

[BlessdWithACurse]

Good write, you can feel the emotion

[Coyote Poetry]

I believe we need more Poets and Writers. Books can open doors to avenues of beauty and great knowledge. I'm glad I was born when we read books. I read 40-50 books a year. Today hard to read three books in one year. I hear what you are saying. I believe need more people willing to write and express what they feel and need.
"I'm thinking of doing this everyday...
Would you read it, if I did?"
Thank you for the words and your thoughts.
Coyote

[Aidz]

mmmmmm as long as this is "just a write" and not a call for help

To dabble in this realm is not a game, Ive seen to many young people, far too many leave us and no one heard them, it is of course their choice not mine.....

Sorry for the rant bud but....

[Fontane Wong]

An excellent piece. I love this poem at the very first of it till the end. Adore it so much.........

[Calypso]

Gotta love poetry... and your insanity.

[Lily Mae]

Always lol..xx