My mind

Its scary

In my head

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Its dark and cold with no candle of hope and love

Just the sickening shadows of evil

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I'm dying in here

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I think i'm dying

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I've gone insane

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Haha bunnies and ice cream trucks

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I want to kill a blueberry

Reviews

[Calypso]

This reminds me of my mind when I'm insomniac. Of how fun is that! I'll tell you something funny. On my Home tab it said 'Sherbs Dreaming Tree Of Poetry wants you to read My mind.'
It was too funny.
P.S. if I were to kill a blueberry I would use my forehead, but that's just me.

[Coyote Poetry]

This is a poem my friend. I like the emotion and the desire of this poem. I get the same feelings in my heads. I want to escape and don't come back. I like the ending to this excellent poem.
Coyote

[Jessica Marlow]

kill a blueberry??? really wow i thought i had random thoughts lol:) but everybody has messed up thoughts trust me im the biggest one if u ever meet my family u would think damn this girls family is crazy thats why i took psychology it helps me understand people better you should try it u might like it just as much as i did

[FaithfullyJennyBear]

You're not the only one going insane, with the wishes of happy thoughts, being killed by the thoughts of the loss of a loved one who wont speak to me.




Great poem, I feel the emotion with every word.

[Ruth]

LOVE the ending love! Cleverly written....xx

[Helpless]

i think this is probably the most abstract thing you have written on here so far. its still good, but very different

[BlessdWithACurse]

Best line : "Haha bunnies and ice cream trucks"

[Tasha]

This was interesting, but I liked it.

[Aidz]

Fuken brill.... thats it no more needs to be said