The road

Highways form

Highways of blood and sand

Of lies an d deceit

 

Cruelty pathes the way

To a brighter day

A day of peace

To form the definitive crease

of Pain and Pleasure

 

The establishment crumbles

Let us rejoice for the pathway to the end

Will take us home again

Reviews

[guiltyascharged]

I really liked this, it shows how at the end of the road there is a happier path life will take.

[☯]

A connective and neatly penned poem. Great write!

[WordNerd]

cool poem :D

[BlessdWithACurse]

Great write, hope you get to where you want to be mate, :] xx

[Aidz]

A well travelled path indeed...... a great write bud

[Lily Mae]

Theres no place like home right? I think this is great.. I enjoyed it..xx

[Matthew Smith]

Short, simple, and nice.

Good job.

[Coyote Poetry]

The road can steal us away and can take us home. I like the way you described the poem. Hard times and dirty streets make home a sweet place to be. Thank you for the outstanding poem.
Coyote