Walking the streets, with a mind of pain and virtue

She swept in like a wraith

Panicked whispers

Screaming virtuous knowledge

 

On the call of the rain

In such violence

In a river of blood

This is her wakening

 

Suffering frenzies of pain

She lingers

Aloft towers of ivory

 

Her scars

As sweet as the kisses she lays

 

Her eyes as deep as the ocean

Weeping agony

 

This soul struck witch

Walks alone

On a path of pain and virtue

 

Reviews

[Ruth]

I adore the language used in this piece love, you have created a masterpiece! xx

[Jessica Marlow]

omg tht was really deep...... i like it:)

[Lily Mae]

A sad, deep and soulful write.. You penned this very well..xx

[Coyote Poetry]

Strong and powerful words made the poem a pleasure to read. I like the way you use the language to make your point.
"Her scars
As sweet as the kisses she lays"
So many statements stood out in this poem. Thank you for the outstanding poem.
Coyote

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

A fierce and resilient piece, well done, great read

[Aidz]

Very kewl write indeed, the maturity in your writes does not belie your age

Well done

[FaithfullyJennyBear]

This is an awesome poem,

'Her scars
As sweet as the kisses she lays

Her eyes as deep as the ocean
Weeping agony'

my favorite stanzas :)
Well done Sherb :) another great write :) x

[Skoo.]

This is absolutely fantabidozy, Sherbzihpoo :D xx