The final dance will be the cue

Lights shining

Serenading whispers

A dance floor of love

For the lovers' last dance

 

Tip your hats for the sweet libertine

The queen of smoke and mirrors

 

Kneel before the black fledgling spirit

The master of darkness

 

Here the music play

This haunting music on the wisp

 

Whispering sirens

And cursing apostles

 

As they meet in

The dance of death

 

The final dance

 

This is satans cue

 

Reviews

[Joiedevivre]

I like the dual use of the word 'here'. Nice flow.

[Tasha]

Very well written but sort of haunting at the same time.
♥ Ta'Shandra

[Calypso]

So well written!

[Hello, Goodbye]

curious curving of the narrative.. nice usage of brevity..

[Alex Walters]

Very powerful and haunting at the same time. It has more strength to it's words than anything that I have ever accomplished, hahaha.

[Commit it then to the f..]

Beautiful and sort of magical

[Short.Nerd]

Wonderful:)

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Classic and derivative of Poe, almost of course, well done

[.]

not what the title suggests ..dark and sombre ..but reminds me of a classical tone

[Lily Mae]

Dark and interesting..great write for sure..x