The lonely man

He sits alone

Just playing away on his guitar

Alone

 

Alone in a world of sultry anger

Of woe and misery

Waiting for his dream girl

The one that will make him smile

 

A flicker of red appears

Alerting the man

Then a pair of chestnut eyes

With curves like an hourglass

Flowing curves like waterfall trickling down a stream

 

A smile of pure beauty

One as red as the finest venetian wine

And teeth as white

As the finest ivory

 

The man drops his guitar

He begins to walk to this angel in disguise

He feels his heart warm

Beads of sweat form

"Is this the one?"

 

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Reviews

[Tasha]

this was a hopeful and beautiful poem. you did a really good job.

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful poem of hope. I like how you set-up the poem. The description made her come alive. A very strong ending to the poem. A outstanding poem. Thank you.
Coyote

[Helpless]

the descriptions made me smile :) so romantic and loving!