The flame of my candle of hope

The flame of my candle of hope

A Poem by Sherbs Dreaming Tree Of Poetry

I see the flame flicker

Of my burning desire

A candle of passion and lust

 

And you came along with a match

A match of hope

With a new flame of love

 

This warming presence that you release

Is that of an angel

 

My little angel of hope

My ray of sunshine

Eyes as brown as an ancient tree

And hair as red as the finest wine

 

She is the flame of my candle of hope

© 2011 Sherbs Dreaming Tree Of Poetry


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I think that the number one way to win a girl's heart is to show her that you put time and thought into everything related to her. With that being said, I hope that you showed her this. With the passion and power within these words, I'm sure that she would love to hear it.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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you have been doing this for two years..trying to segregate me alone while lying to your followers...

Posted 13 Years Ago


0 of 4 people found this review constructive.

that you deceive them under fake profiles, and abuse them to no end..

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0 of 3 people found this review constructive.

why not tell your viewers what you do to people all over the internet?

Posted 13 Years Ago


0 of 3 people found this review constructive.

i see your message at the top..are you going to tell them you are a pill junkie or who cuts themselves and sits all day long writing poems to inflict guilt on a man ? and that you cheated on your own sister in law but sleeping with her husband..are you going to tell them that?

Posted 13 Years Ago


0 of 3 people found this review constructive.

so what if I am dawn gordon are you going to tell them you cut your arms while your kids are around and take pills? or harass a man because of an abortion

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0 of 3 people found this review constructive.

i know this is not BM, because he does not post christ has sins..or I really pray he doesnt...

Posted 13 Years Ago


0 of 3 people found this review constructive.

O.o omg.... this is so sweet and romantic! i simply adore this! :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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Sherbs Dreaming Tree Of Poetry
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I am Sherb of Sherbs Dreaming tree, Come inside and see, My marvellous range of tea. Haha Im Sherb I love poetry, it was my life for wuite a while and i have been suffering an 18 month block .. more..

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