The flame of my candle of hope

I see the flame flicker

Of my burning desire

A candle of passion and lust

 

And you came along with a match

A match of hope

With a new flame of love

 

This warming presence that you release

Is that of an angel

 

My little angel of hope

My ray of sunshine

Eyes as brown as an ancient tree

And hair as red as the finest wine

 

She is the flame of my candle of hope

Reviews

[Alex Walters]

I think that the number one way to win a girl's heart is to show her that you put time and thought into everything related to her. With that being said, I hope that you showed her this. With the passion and power within these words, I'm sure that she would love to hear it.

[Tasha]

Very magical, I enjoyed it a lot.
♥ Ta'Shandra

[Calypso]

I've felt like this too before. It was like I couldn't feel love and someone comes along and I love them. Great way to show this.

[Sarah Morgan]

I absolutely agree with Alex. I can see some women being absolutely aggravating with the way they want men to be, but there are a lot of women who just want to know that the person they love cares or to know someone cares about them and that is more precious to most of us than flowers, candy, and diamonds. Great write!

[Jessica Marlow]

wow!!! is all i can say is just wow... that was very lovely it almost gives you hope that there is someone out there for everyone

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Trusting and almost relaxed with a huge bounding emotion, well done

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ahhh..how lovely...

[☯]

Very magical and thoughtful. You've created such images in my mind, and your words are also very soothing to read. :)

[Aidz]

Very kewl indeed

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful poem. I like the gentle pace and desire of the words. The description create a beautiful vision of someone with strength and hope that allow the people near her to become stronger and better. A very strong ending to a outstanding poem. Thank you.
Coyote