Candy

Eyes of pure love
Lulling me into a trance of uncontrollable happiness
Words as sweet the finest sugar
Causing my heart to flutter

My heart grows sore
For the distance is too far
I wish I could sit with you
And keep you safe
From all the pain and hurt in the world

Someone as amazing as you
Deserves only love and laughter
Sadness should elude you
And Happiness embrace you

You are candy of the finest delicacies
And the one who makes it all ok

Reviews

[Sarah Morgan]

This is beautiful - I loved it. I only wish my husband would open up and tell me how he actually feels. I come to writerscafe and see an abundance of men who write like this - not in this way, but are able to show their feelings is something not to be thrown away so never do that! :)

[Lily Mae]

I love "You are candy of the finest delicacies, and the one who makes it all ok"..perfect. Words that make it simply acceptable to be...xxx

[Joiedevivre]

What a sweet declaration of love!

[FaithfullyJennyBear]

aww this is cute SherbyBear..
write more cute things, it's rather romantic :P xx

[Skoo.]

This is very good Sherb (: xx

[Aidz]

I think Halmark cards are looking for a new writer...


Seriously kewl scribe indeed

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Sweet and innocent, well prosed.

[Siddartha Beth Pierce]

Delightfully sweet!

[Helpless]

this melted my heart with every word. your writing is so romantic and loving, and omg... i just love this. i'm adding this to my favorites. thank you for posting this, your words are sweet candy to me