Candy

Eyes of pure love
Lulling me into a trance of uncontrollable happiness
Words as sweet the finest sugar
Causing my heart to flutter

My heart grows sore
For the distance is too far
I wish I could sit with you
And keep you safe
From all the pain and hurt in the world

Someone as amazing as you
Deserves only love and laughter
Sadness should elude you
And Happiness embrace you

You are candy of the finest delicacies
And the one who makes it all ok

Reviews

[Calypso]

I wish I could have someone tell me this.

[Alex Walters]

I can relate to this one very well. The words ring very true and sincere, which is exactly how good writing should be.

[Ravyne Hawke]

Such a beautiful love poem.. it's always hard when there is distance between you and the one you love.. well crafted poem!

[Brianna Brie]

Your words have a way of making the reader long for love. The love poems you write are so tender. It is hard to believe that you write the dark stuff, too.

[Coyote Poetry]

You made the word "candy" become more strong and powerful. The description was written with skill.
"You are candy of the finest delicacies
And the one who makes it all ok"
Thank you for the outstanding poem. I did enjoy reading your words.
Coyote

[Short.Nerd]

Hehehe amazing. I like it:)

[Winters_Lost_Walk]

I love the comparison to candy =) And i love the way you want to protect the ones you love...

Nice write, really enjoyed reading it.

[Tasha]

This is beautiful and cute, I loved it.

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ahhh..loving the sentiment..absence makes the heart grow fonder!

[Naomi Roseღ]

Aww :). This was really cute and beautiful. I liked it.