Ha ha. Well I have been there man. I agree totally. Society has us brainwashed and we should all never say we know that God does and feels, and if he is indeed real is a mystery. You have a very open mind! I love it. Very deep and I am gonna look into more of your works :)
Wow,
you have great thoughts.
And wonderful questions.
Christianity is nothing but pure fear and warning.
it has nothing to do with happiness or peace.
To me all religions suck.
There is always a loophole or a loose end.
It seems as if being a buddhist is the only ok religion.
But thats just my opinion.
This was ultra interesting.
You have so many thoughts and so much imagery invested into this write.
This is a truely powerful poem.
All faith is blind. All churches are made of brick and wood, not God-given grace. God is a 2 A.M. drive down a deserted highway, your girl under your arm, a cigarette on your lips, a beer in your cup-holder, a timeless, great tune blasting into a warm summer night. Maybe I'm a Hedonist, but my God is a good time.
Interesting poem. Some good points. The grammar could use a little work, and some of the spelling is wrong. Nothing to hold against you, tbh, and you'll probably figure those out some day.
Oh, and... I think I recognize the half-there, nutty, spammed reviews below. B***h is batshit nuts. If it's the same loon I've seen elsewhere, it's just a new account. If not, then this site is beginning to worry me.
HAHAHAHAHAHAHA how illogical is either point of veiw mate...? What your saying is like the reverse Christian perspective, asking people to cross from one extreme to the other... many want to live a good, honest life and can use the Bible or any other holy book as guidelines. On the other hand, preaching barely works nowadays, enjoyed this read it was curious :*)
and by the way doorknob satan does not control fire and brimstone, God does...satan does not perform those sorts of miracles, he does divination, mind reading, astrology, moving objects, hearing voices..and lifting bodies from beds like my great grandma had, but Satan can not do fire and brimstone unless in a campfire ok?
so have had it with the two of you..I am more interested now in finding out about this Chris..I did find one poem that is his..and indicated something that I wish to find out more about..I think the experience with chris and discernment might be more rewarding..he never outwardly betrayed me for one, or lied i stalked him for two..
i dont think i will ever see BM come clean on his beliefs in christ or God, I think rheumatoid is going to kill me first..honestly..that is my feelings currently, I think he will deny christ to man right up through, right bm?
and i want to know if poetic justice really believes that satan is a man made creation? are you sure of that? nothing ever changes huh? poem after poem, crying on the inside of changes..I think I will die of rheumatoid first before you come clean on your beliefs BM, i dont think i will ever see it
right? two out of the seven sins is gluttony and sloth..meaning fat and lazy..correct? your poem says he unavoidable....and you are content with that life then?
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