A Spring Day in Suburbia

As a smiling moon hides

A new sun rises

Peaking over the horizon

Lighting the day ahead

 

Fields of green

Glistening in this new light

Surrounds the new generation

As eyes open into a new day

 

Clouds try to hide this beauty

But this celestial god

Battles through

This shadowy object

 

At noon

When she is at her peak

Her aura shines over all

Even though she knows

That the descent

Is beginning

 

But even though the day is ending

This celestial marvel

Will rise again

Brightening the hearts

And souls

Of All

Reviews

[HopelesslyDevoted]

i agree, the last part was epic and i loved it!

[DearSweetAgony]

I really love the last part.
Its beautifully executed.
This poem is very dreamy,
I'm in the smallest,darkess corner of my room.
But while reading this I felt every adjective.
Really Great Job!

[Alice In My Own Wonderl..]

"At noon
When she is at her peak
Her aura shines over all
Even though she knows
That the descent
Is beginning",
this stanza was beautiful. You painted the picture perfectly. I loved this poem. Wonderful write :) 100/100

[☯]

The description in this is abstract, and nicely written. It isn't too much of something or too little to understand.
"As a smiling moon hides
A new sun rises"
I agree with this most definitely. Good write :)

[Lily Mae]

Oh, defiantly a new favorite of mine. I love it :) xx From top to bottom perfect:)x

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

A satirical ending to a perfect prose, well written and playfully delivered well done, good reed.