A Spring Day in Suburbia

As a smiling moon hides

A new sun rises

Peaking over the horizon

Lighting the day ahead

 

Fields of green

Glistening in this new light

Surrounds the new generation

As eyes open into a new day

 

Clouds try to hide this beauty

But this celestial god

Battles through

This shadowy object

 

At noon

When she is at her peak

Her aura shines over all

Even though she knows

That the descent

Is beginning

 

But even though the day is ending

This celestial marvel

Will rise again

Brightening the hearts

And souls

Of All

Reviews

[OtherWorldWoman]

I enjoy your aspect of such a thing as this. Tis a very majestic and glamorous point of view and it reminds me of king and queen-like entities ruling some vast land. Well done.

[Coyote Poetry]

A amazing poem. I could see the descriptions come alive from your words. Watching the sun rise is a treat. She begin so softly and then her heat can overtake a summer day. Thank you for the outstanding poem.
Coyote

[Skoo.]

This is brilliant, Sherbzimerbz (:
I absolutely love it :D

[lostboy]

the light shines from this. never lose hope

[.]

nice to read such an uplifting and inspirational piece from you..indeed the celestial beauty that gives us life should be celebrated..well written

[Siddartha Beth Pierce]

Beautifully written. Succinct and moving. Thank you!
Light,
Siddartha

[Short.Nerd]

Very good.

[Sarah Morgan]

This poem gives me the feeling of starting over - turning over a new leaf whatever you want to call it.. it is beautifully written. It kind of like one of those songs you put on to brighten your mood - this poem brightens my mood. "Clouds try to hide this beauty, but the celestial god, Battles through, This shadowy object" beautiful.

[Chris Smith Welshpoetcs]

Good ending my friend.

[M.Babu]

What a twist of an ending you stuck in this piece.

Nice job.