Katherine wheels of the soul
A Poem by
Sherbs Dreaming Tree Of Poetry
My mind spins
Rotating
Pirouetting
Round and round
Eyes blurring
Senses deafening
Heart pounds
My chest gets tight
Fingers tingling
A dull sensation
Nerves congealing
I must start to fight
I've lost control
I'm falling
Plummeting
Down into loves cavern
You make me lose control
My heart pounds
And my soul spins
Like a Katherine Wheel
© 2011 Sherbs Dreaming Tree Of Poetry
Reviews
What a descriptive piece this was my friend!
Nicely done:
"My mind spins
Rotating
Pirouetting
Round and round"
Magnificent!
Posted 13 Years Ago
A intensely dizzying array of emotions and imagery.
Posted 13 Years Ago
A intensely dizzying array of emotions and imagery.
very intense, not sure i understand this one though.
Posted 13 Years Ago
very intense, not sure i understand this one though.
I could really feel this write.. You've done a great job in expressing these emotions. :)x
Posted 13 Years Ago
I could really feel this write.. You've done a great job in expressing these emotions. :)x
I loved how this small poem is so simple, but so capturing. All in a sequence of your soul spinning, and the imagery I had in my mind fit perfectly. Very nice job :)
Posted 13 Years Ago
I loved how this small poem is so simple, but so capturing. All in a sequence of your soul spinning, and the imagery I had in my mind fit perfectly. Very nice job :)
A widened view of morality, simple and plain to the point of perfection, well done
Posted 13 Years Ago
A widened view of morality, simple and plain to the point of perfection, well done
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Added on April 18, 2011
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Sherbs Dreaming Tree Of Poetry Kirkcaldy, Sherbs house on Sherbs street :D, United Kingdom
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Im Sherb I love poetry, it was my life for wuite a while and i have been suffering an 18 month block ..
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