Katherine wheels of the soul

My mind spins

Rotating

Pirouetting

Round and round

 

Eyes blurring

Senses deafening

Heart pounds

My chest gets tight

 

Fingers tingling

A dull sensation

Nerves congealing

I must start to fight

 

I've lost control

I'm falling

Plummeting

Down into loves cavern

 

You make me lose control

My heart pounds

And my soul spins

Like a Katherine Wheel

Reviews

[OtherWorldWoman]

This description of intimacy and its effect on those who experience it is very interesting and different. Tis not the same old cliche and I admire that. Tis a very good piece. Good job :)

[Calypso]

You know when I first clicked on this I thought it would be about someone names Katherine. I'm so stupid. I forgot about a Katherine Wheel.
Lovely poem that I can truly relate to.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you for a new term for me. "Katherine Wheel". I hope I don't find out how being in one feels. I like the pace and the purpose of this poem. Life can make us dizzy and confuse. Thank you for the outstanding poem.
Coyote

[Tasha]

My mind spins

Rotating

Pirouetting

Round and round

This was amazing!

[FaithfullyJennyBear]

Aww I love the whole similie poetry.. So sweet :3 xx

[Siddartha Beth Pierce]

Wonderfully captures the essence of the heart enraptured!
Light,
Siddartha

[Sarah Morgan]

Oh love... makes me feel so many of these feelings. Palms sweaty, Heart pounding. It's amazing how love can make you an out of control person. You can be so in sync - going about your way when love springs one upon you. It's good and bad. The first 'I love you' the feelings that come along with the blossom of a romance is something I wish I could bottle up and sell. Id give anything to feel those feelings all of the time for someone.

[Short.Nerd]

Nice!

[Chris Smith Welshpoetcs]

Awesome.

[Alice In My Own Wonderl..]

"I've lost control
I'm falling
Plummeting
Down into loves cavern",
this stanza was magnificent. You are an amazing poet. Keep writing:) 100/100