Romances funeral dirge beckons as dark clouds linger

Feel the rain

Bouncing off of your skin

Feel the thunder

Make your skin quiver

 

See the hearse creep

Darkening the day

See the coffin lie

Dulling the atmosphere

 

Hear the organ groan

An ever quickening dirge

Hear the mourners cry

A sickening loss

 

This is the day

This is the time

The end of romance

The start of hate

 

It's all over

All fading

Romances dirge sounds out

And The dark clouds lurk

Reviews

[LA Lorena]

I t can feel like this, that all is dead and lost, that there is no longer hope or life or anything other than the pain. I can feel this one.

[Lily Mae]

You've penned your emotions on death or the death of a relationship well here.. A great poem:) x

[Coyote Poetry]

A poem with a lot of sadness and darkness. Death can leave few good doors open. I like the way you explain each step n the process of death. A excellent poem.
"This is the day
This is the time
The end of romance
The start of hate"
Thank you for sharing your poetry.
Coyote

[Sarah Morgan]

You know I love this, but at the same time when I picture things that could happen to someone I love it puts millions of feelings in my mind. It makes me think of the stages of loss .. anger, bargaining, acceptance. "The end of romance, The start of hate" it's really how it goes.. I'm not sure if this is what your going for, but it's what I thought about .. how angry I am with death. Good write :)