Romances funeral dirge beckons as dark clouds linger

Feel the rain

Bouncing off of your skin

Feel the thunder

Make your skin quiver

 

See the hearse creep

Darkening the day

See the coffin lie

Dulling the atmosphere

 

Hear the organ groan

An ever quickening dirge

Hear the mourners cry

A sickening loss

 

This is the day

This is the time

The end of romance

The start of hate

 

It's all over

All fading

Romances dirge sounds out

And The dark clouds lurk

Reviews

[OtherWorldWoman]

This piece is absolutely amazing. I felt like I was there, in the scene you created...So many emotions and sensations all at once. Wonderful job. You are a great writer.

[MoriartyMesa]

Oh man, did you score Jim Morrison with me on this one. I tip my hat for making me actually shiver, blush, and be wooed at the same time. Very very charming. like the fist full of reality you threw at this. loved it.

[M.Babu]

"See the hearse creep
Darkening the day
See the coffin lie
Dulling the atmosphere"

What wonderfully unpleasant monologue here my friend!

[Chris Smith Welshpoetcs]

A different kind of dark poem my friend.

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a morose and melancholy poem...dark ..the title hooked me in

[DearSweetAgony]

WOW
Great Job!
I love this poem!
Wonderful!

[Alice In My Own Wonderl..]

"Hear the organ groan
An ever quickening dirge
Hear the mourners cry
A sickening loss",

this stanza was epic. This poem is really dark. I loved it :) Keep writing.

[HopelesslyDevoted]

very good work, dark but awesome

[CookieMonster♥&h..]

dark i like it:)

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Dark, frightening and clear cut. Flowed perfectly, and a great read, shocking imagery and a slight sense of erotica.