The truth lies inside the eyes of the tiger

You lurk in corners

Whispering lies and false pretences

Causing distress

 

You can smell your fear

As I appear

To destroy you

To uncover the lies

 

Claims of a copy

Of your destroyed conscience

Make me laugh

For I know the truth

 

I stalk you like my prey

For I am the tiger

And this is the hunt

 

For all your lies have been discovered

As the truth lies in the eyes of the tiger

Reviews

[Short.Nerd]

Wonderful!

[Chris Smith Welshpoetcs]

Excellent.

[CookieMonster♥&h..]

well done:)

[Kate Hunter]

well done. I liked it alot. keep writing!

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Dark and excellent write, the metophors was great as the flow!

[Skoo.]

Amazing as per usual, Sherbziroar (: xx

[Michael Morris]

Bravo man, nice work, dark yet insightful, if this American Irish drunk ever makes its back to the UK i'm getting you a few shots and we will cause havoc

[DearSweetAgony]

Very beautiful
this poem is very dark and I love that about it.
"I stalk you like my prey.For I am the tiger and this is the hunt."
Lovely.

[Donald Olds]

this sounds a lot like one of my poems. It's really nice. Have you read any of mine? do You know of a fast and easy way to get published? My favorite lines are
-For all your lies have been discovered as the truth lies in the eyes of the tiger- that's just amazing. I love how you've pieced this together! keep it up.

[SpokenWord]

They apply tongue in ear creating treachery with the words they speak. Your first verse reminded me of Asher in Spartacus blood and sand. This is a straight forward poem of lies vs. truth and the repercussion of choosing lies over truth. Good write