Intolerance in vain

I suffered then

And you will suffer now

Break me down then build me up

To be honest...

I’ll just break you down

 

I’ll be vicious

I’ll burn you

I’ll beat you

And guess what

I won’t say sorry

 

You never wanted more than to hurt and lie

And all I ever really wanted was you

 

Stay inside your head

I’ll stay in yours too

Keeping the pain in

Keeping the fire alight

This unity is the end

 

Don’t forget all I ever really wanted was you

And if I can’t have all of you..

Then i’ll just take your soul...

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Calypso]

Very powerful and emotional. Well done

[Tate Morgan]

Ah the memory that burns in ember long after the coals go out

[Raymond]

Damn! I love a little vengence but this, this is just fantastic..stay inside your head, I'll stay in your too...perfect!

[Searching 4 Serenity]

Love the intensity that flows in this. You can feel the blanket of shadows engulf. Nicely done

[SimplyOlivia]

Wow. I was just going through drama that happened just now. I sat down and read this poem. This just fits it perfectly.

[CookieMonster♥&h..]

i juat luvv tha darkness of it:)

[Dilan Gray]

I love the dark emotions in this poem as well as the images! I loved the lines "Stay inside your head/I'll stay in your too". It is like you are going to be a haunting memory. I know those kinds of memories all too well. I really enjoyed the way this poem flowed. Another great emotional poem!

[Chris Smith Welshpoetcs]

Emotions displayed well my friend.

[SilentLullabies]

This poem is one of my favorites :) I have felt this way many times before and you captured the thoughts and emotions perfectly.

[FaithfullyJennyBear]

scary :P
great poem sherb, your amazing at writing :) xx