Love's like a drum kit

My heart beats

Like a double bass

My soul rattles like the skins I beat

 

I crack the shells of society

For you my love

I'd play loves drums

Until the end of time

I'd quit playing

If it was for you

 

No I can't feel like this

This is uncanny

This is insane

This can't  be true

I must be dying

 

 

 

Reviews

[M.Babu]

This comparison was so great in this piece.

"My heart beats
Like a double bass
My soul rattles like the skins I beat"

Nice job.

[Chris Smith Welshpoetcs]

That beating heart, great poem.

[iamkim]

so nice! there were times I used to feel that kind of feeling. ohhhh.... love love love! wonderful!

[fallen.angel.]

This is an amaazziinnggg poem

[CookieMonster♥&h..]

this is deep i lyk it:)

[Brad]

she must be one deep beauty