Stay with me

I beg you,

Stay here,

Please be mine forever,

Take me in your arms until the end of time,

Those arms of love,

 

You leave and i feel the tears,

Well to my eyes,

 

if you choose to leave,

Then kill me,

If you will not,

Just,

Stay with me

Author's Note

I wrote this when i was crying about my ex coz i suck that much :/ so please review

Reviews

[MoriartyMesa]

You have a talent for making me think of girl punk bands singing your poems as lyrics except i am at a total loss with this poem. I am leaning to Lisa Loeb, but it also reminds me of Avril for some reason. Either way, awesome job, and in the words of every sassy black chick i ever met.

Girl you dont need no man all up in your business! You A strong woman girl!

they dont say that to me, its usually, 'wow M your the coolest kid in town" but thats rare.

[Searching 4 Serenity]

Poetry of love&yearning tends to be a hard one for many people. This was pretty simple&honest. Nice emotions.

[iamkim]

This is a bomb! A powerful expression of love!

[Winters_Lost_Walk]

Everyone goes through that pain at a point in life, I get how you feel.
Very direct feelings and a reader can easily see that you are in pain.

[CookieMonster♥&h..]

reallly really good i can relate:)

[Dilan Gray]

I like how strong the emotions are in this poem. I think everyone can relate to this at least a little. No one wants to be left behind and it hurts when it happens and I think this poem shows that pain beautifully. I love the desperation in this poem, it is very real. Good job.

[BloodyRabbit]

yet another awesome poem! :) your emotions are conveyed beautifuly with simple words, which makes it even better.. you do not suck, your an amazing poet and even though it may hurt now, the pain will fade away in the end :) so keep writing and expressing yourself through it because i love your poems as do many others :)

[Brad]

wow, there is a lotta hurt in there, you know how to convey your emotions well with words, the computer monitor is dripping in tears--sorry for the heart break, i've always used heartbreak as my muse, hard to revisit, but cathartic in the same breath

[BlueberryKisses]

Very emotional, its a great poem, I love it :)

[♥Chloe-The-Zombi..]

you do not suck. you are an amazing poet. i could really relate to this. the line:
"Please be mine forever,
Take me in your arms until the end of time,
Those arms of love,

You leave and i feel the tears,
Well to my eyes,"
this line was amazing. this poem is amazing. keep writing. 100/100