Pure Romance

A night of pure love

Of peace and serenity

A night of happiness

 

This is what she desires

and this is what i shall provide

For it is my duty

To make you smile

 

I love you

For you

Not the people who say i shouldn't

You are the one

Who makes my world complete

 

And for this

i shall provide

One night of pure Romance

Reviews

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Wow..!!!

[Ravyne Hawke]

wonderful poem.. love the flow and imagery. My only suggestion. In stanza 2 line 1.. change "she desires" to "you desire" so that the pronoun is consistant with the rest of the poem. Excellent write.

[Katub]

I'm glad your happy.

[BloodyRabbit]

great write :) really cute and light... so different from the others:)

[freelancejouster]

this is light and sweet :)

[Maggie]

Emmm...this is delicious...tehehe

[HopelesslyDevoted]

cute :)

[Lily Mae]

One night can hold in memory forever...but why have it in memory if you can taste it every day:) xx Great write.. xx

[iamkim]

oh come on! u kiddin? this is a bomb! XD i really love it. part 2 part 2 part 2 please :D

[SpokenWord]

Only 1 night of pure romance? how about a lifetime? :) I like the part that says they love her for her and not for what others say. People on the outside rarely understand how it is on the inside and to actually feel the love living inside. Beautiful write.