Fruitful kisses

Your lips as red

As the finest wine

Straight from the vineyard

Grapes as sweet as your eyes

 

Her love as sweet as sugar

Cascading love

Upon all

 

Her flowing hair as soft as kashmere

As red as strawberries

That caress your lips

 

Your kisses

So fruitful

For she is my fruity friend :)

 

Reviews

[♥Chloe-The-Zombi..]

this is cute. its different from your normal work. i like it

[Maggie]

I like the last line. Theres all this romantic build-up, and then a sort of giggle at the end

[Kelsie Eileen Stark]

Very sweet

[BloodyRabbit]

epic as always :) a beautiful sweet and romantic/sexy poem...:) good job

[Lily Mae]

I like it ..sweet and all. I think it's delicious and sexy...light and beautiful.. great write..x

[freelancejouster]

i love the analogies and symbolism here, it's beautiful. though, the last line is sort of cheesy and the repetition of the word 'sweet' diminishes the soft power, here.

[sushi]

Wow!!! Nice one....

[Chris Smith Welshpoetcs]

The sweetest of kisses ; )

[FaithfullyJennyBear]

cute -.- but you used my words D: lol xx

[BlueberryKisses]

:3 awesome poem, I love it ^.^ xx