Falling for an angel

For FaithfullyJenny

My angel

She is my light

In the dark

 

My smile

Inside sadness

My love is never ending

For my angel

 

She makes me smile

With a golden heart

And her emerald eyes

Shining like stars

On midsummers eve

 

Everything is happy

When i'm with my angel

 

She is my love

My turmoil has gone

My anger has subsided

I love her and thats it

Reviews

[♥Chloe-The-Zombi..]

this is cute :) i like it

[Maggie]

And that's it...lol...nice

[BloodyRabbit]

awww...that is such a sweet poem :) great job

[Lily Mae]

Beautiful tribute to the girl with green eyes:) xx

[freelancejouster]

this poem is purely explanatory and, that's fine, but it doesn't have any life... it needs to go somewhere, you know? if she's changed you and calms you, that's wonderful, but go for something more brilliant, would you? i feel like you're in a safe zone.

[sushi]

Amazing!!!!

[Chris Smith Welshpoetcs]

We all need our own Angel my friend ; )

[BlueberryKisses]

n'aww this is nice :)

[HopelesslyDevoted]

very cute :)