Hurting you

Why do I hurt you?

Why do I hurt everyone?

I always mess up

I do these things to be better

But its just getting worse...

 

i do it for you...

But you hate it...

Just to look better

Not fat

Just skinny

 

I wait for the day

When all this sick

Will make sense...

Can you just hold me until then?

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Easy to be angry. Hard to find peace. I like the question in the poem. Good to search for reason not to be pissed off and try to be content. I like the complete poem. A very good ending to a excellent poem. Thank you.
Coyote

[Chris Smith Welshpoetcs]

When we are hurting inside we try to make others feel that pain, but in the end we need someone close. Good poem my friend.

[Right Wing Constervativ..]

nice write

[HopelesslyDevoted]

the ending question made the whole poem great... we need someone to hold us in our darkest moments, or else we may not make it through them to see the light again.

[Dilan Gray]

I love the question at the end. After everything, all the pain and hurt, you sometimes just need someone to be there for you and hold you while you try and get things figured out. This was a great poem.

[Lily Mae]

I can relate to this write.. I did that until I nearly died from not eating for a year and a half.. I was starving for the love of others but the love had to be self love... This is a great write, you penn the emotions well.. x

[LA Lorena]

sometimes it never does make sense. and perfection is always elusive. It's nice to find someone to lean on for strength, but true strength comes from the inside. keep up the fight!