The essence of funk

I feel that groove

The bass firing

The guitars'a screeching

The singer howling

 

Then the rolling beats

That Jazz drummer

Pounding the skins

Rattling the shells

 

The crowd in a frenzy

Free love flows

Hallucinations floating

Noone gives a damn

These halls

Are the essence of funk

Reviews

[Quinn Blackburn]

Energetic, vivid images, full of life in all it's jagged glory... well done!

[northern monkey]

Brilliant stuff! Alive with vital imagery, yet so sparing with words. Talented.

[Chris Smith Welshpoetcs]

Time to dance ; )

[Maggie]

Haha I like the last line. You get what music does to people.

[Coyote Poetry]

Nothing better then good music and wild and crazy people. It always feel good to be around people with the same goal. A excellent poem. Strong words made the poem come alive.
Coyote

[HopelesslyDevoted]

nice! good imagery!

[Dilan Gray]

I felt like I could see everything you were describing. This was really great and I liked the flow. Great poem!

[Lily Mae]

I felt like I was there...and wish I was today lol. Great write..x