The Jaberwockys Paradox

A little experimentation

Ah tis a confibular situation

That this fish is so chocolatey

Orangey almost

Oh wait thats the satsuma

Oh well

 

Im stand still all the way to mexico

So i can get some chicken for my rooster

I love my rooster

He loves me

But he know imma eat him

Heehee

 

Nomnomnom

Rooster has just been Jaberwockied

Reviews

[iamkim]

This is very entertaining! Thanks for sharing :)

[SilentDreamer]

Very humorous, nice job. :)

[.shalynn.009.]

Haha. very reminiscent of Lewis Carol's poem. Although, if you were referring to his monster, then Jabberwocky is spelled with two B's. A nice allusion to one of my favorite poems. The last stanza made me laugh, just with the onomotopeia that usually is used with zombies. And very original, turning "Jabberwoky" into an act, rather than just a monster. Silly and interesting poem. Thanks for the RR.

[Calypso]

Crazy

[Ravyne Hawke]

Amusing poem, Sherbs.. love the verbage of Jaberwocky, guess we can make most anything into a verb ..your poem gave me joy!

[Chris Smith Welshpoetcs]

Like the crazy feel to this ; )

[Maggie]

Thats funny...it made me smile :)

[freelancejouster]

it's sort of silly, but i like it alright. i think this could work well written sort of 'dirty pretty' style, if you're up for a little more experimentation. ...punctuation, you need it here where your character talks over himself and second guesses himself, more than other places. i know you think punctuation isn't your style, but at least some is needed.

[Dilan Gray]

I like this. It was fun to read and just kind of makes the imagination explode, in a good way. Great poem!

[Skoo.]

Hehe nomz (^.^) I like it :D xx