Another floating beauty

I glare into your eyes

I feel like I'm gliding

With the birds in the skies.

 

Your smile radiates happiness

In everyone who has but a dwindling

Shadow of a soul.

 

You make me feel as though I'm flying

High and weightless

Looking down on your beauty.

 

Your skin, as soft as the finest silk,

Rich and flowing.

 

Your lips, as red as the finest wine,

Full and fruity.

 

And those are the things I love about you.

Reviews

[M.Babu]

I wasn't blessed with a crazy good memory but i feel I've read this (or something absolutely similar) somewhere i swear!
I think i'll requote the deja vu'd great lines again:
"You make me feel as though I'm flying

High and weightless

Looking down on your beauty."
Great stanza this was:)

You've appropriately structured this piece well. The brevity of it all just accentuates further the beauty's power. Nice

[Chris Smith Welshpoetcs]

That feeling of love, full and fruity...love it ; )

[Arabdha]

wow.. mesmerizing..!

[Sherbs Dreaming Tree Of..]

This was written by me about a year ago but FaithfullyJenny put it up i'm just putting it on my profile

[FaithfullyJennyBear]

^.^ Great memories for the beginning of Year 11, for me :) N'aww x