Another floating beauty

I glare into your eyes

I feel like I'm gliding

With the birds in the skies.

 

Your smile radiates happiness

In everyone who has but a dwindling

Shadow of a soul.

 

You make me feel as though I'm flying

High and weightless

Looking down on your beauty.

 

Your skin, as soft as the finest silk,

Rich and flowing.

 

Your lips, as red as the finest wine,

Full and fruity.

 

And those are the things I love about you.

Reviews

[M.Babu]

I wasn't blessed with a crazy good memory but i feel I've read this (or something absolutely similar) somewhere i swear!
I think i'll requote the deja vu'd great lines again:
"You make me feel as though I'm flying

High and weightless

Looking down on your beauty."
Great stanza this was:)

You've appropriately structured this piece well. The brevity of it all just accentuates further the beauty's power. Nice

[Calypso]

Crazy good.

[Dilan Gray]

I love how you specifically say the things about the person you love and describe them in such a beautiful way. Love the poem!

[Ravyne Hawke]

beautiful love story here.. sensuous and divine.. excellent write.

[Katub]

I like it

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful and powerful poem of love. Some people can light up a day and life just by being near and being your friend. Few people will set our soul afire. When they come near. Keep them close and hold them tight as long as you can. A outstanding poem. Thank you for your positive poem. You are good at them too.
Coyote

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Beautiful

[Brad]

someone's got it bad..haha

[kieran cruz]

One word to describe this poem : amazing

[HopelesslyDevoted]

this truly full of sweetness and love, i really do love this one!

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Good one..!!