Another floating beauty

I glare into your eyes

I feel like I'm gliding

With the birds in the skies.

 

Your smile radiates happiness

In everyone who has but a dwindling

Shadow of a soul.

 

You make me feel as though I'm flying

High and weightless

Looking down on your beauty.

 

Your skin, as soft as the finest silk,

Rich and flowing.

 

Your lips, as red as the finest wine,

Full and fruity.

 

And those are the things I love about you.

Reviews

[M.Babu]

I wasn't blessed with a crazy good memory but i feel I've read this (or something absolutely similar) somewhere i swear!
I think i'll requote the deja vu'd great lines again:
"You make me feel as though I'm flying

High and weightless

Looking down on your beauty."
Great stanza this was:)

You've appropriately structured this piece well. The brevity of it all just accentuates further the beauty's power. Nice

[MoriartyMesa]

Another great piece of work that would go well with a Latin guitar, glass of wine, and candles blowing in the wind on a hot summer's night.

[Sarah Morgan]

This is very beautiful. The details you put into it, the thoughts and feelings towards the person is very evident. Great write.

[☯]

The first time I read this poem, it really made me smile. I love the way you described the soul and your emotions into this piece.
"I glare into your eyes
I feel like I'm gliding
With the birds in the skies."
Very beautiful and lovely. Great write :)

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Basic and serene a real crowd pleaser, well done, good job

[Naomi Roseღ]

This was great.

[SimplyOlivia]

I love the description. I frequently use this description for my goddess or vampires. If this is a writing of a true person, then I am entirely glad you found them.

[Lily Mae]

Oh I like this allot.. :) Great write..xx

[Liza]

lovely - physical and emotional depth - like a heart is soaring out of the sky smiling brilliantly...

[northern monkey]

Sumptuous, a pleasure to read. Great write Sherb